All Comments on 'Mandy, The Couch & Me'

A fun little story — thank you for sharing!

Interesting premise.

But the sex is like a laundry list. Just a list of what was done, not how it delt to either him or her.

What were her breasts like? What were her nipples like? Why no description of what it felt like when he played with them? Felt like to him? To her?

No dialog while it was taking place. Too bad.

Three stars.

Hey all! If you haven't checked my other stories, there is another Mandy story written from the perspective of the wife, in the same time frame. Hope you enjoy and kind of consider them "one work".

ALMOST A FIVE....

I felt it ended a little bit too soon. Perhaps with Chapter 2... ;-)

Good job!

X-Man

Outstanding - what a neat story! Wonderful group of characters and interesting plot. Thanks for writing this story. I hope you choose to continue with additional chapters.

I have to admit, I preferred your TOD with your aunts story a little, but JUST a little. This also has the potential for a sequel or two, but not like the TOD story, alas.

You are really, really good at this!!!

Fantastic, need a part 2