All Comments on 'Manu's Wish Come True'

by mriceberg

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Kitist02Kitist02about 8 years ago
Nicely done

Something a little different, and handled nicely. Slightly askew from typical US English usage, but charmingly so.

Aside from apparently not using any lubricant, the action was described intensely enough to arouse this reader.

Please keep writing.

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