All Comments on 'Mapping New Territory'

This was so hot!!! Fluff and dominance and something I really want to try! Can't wait to read more from you.

All I can say is, "Wow!" The pacing is perfect: not only is Suzie being edged, so is the reader. I was drawn into the sensuality and was pushing as hard as Suzie for Moriah to cut to the chase. The way you drew the reader into the action was brilliant. This is how a slow build up should be done.

Erotically intense and fun, even tongue in cheek piece. You’ve created two interesting, believable characters who clearly enjoy one another. And we get to know each a bit more here. Might be argued that within good erotic fiction sex tells the story; the story reflected in the sex — can even be outrageous debauchery but never gratuitous, rather weaved within to where story and character relations “told” through the sex. You do that well. Title perfect and liked in particular the line: “I was teaching her to enjoy herself.”

Thanks for your kind words @Migbird, @SomaSlave, and @ComingUpSmellingLikeRoses!

@Migbird I almost named the story “Stimulation Nation” I’m so happy I didn’t! That’s a horrible title.