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What a wicked way to tease the reader. The humiliations will begin in the next installment. A good beginning with Marie taking charge and basically Dominating from the bottom. Trapping the married man by his own inability to say 'no' or control his lust. A shy man who had probably never thought of humiliation as erotic will now be obsessed. I look forward to see how depraved they become and if it spills out into his married life.

Great start. More please

I guess it's building up the erotic suspense

Excuse me but this is MY story. I wrote it based on true events years ago. Its blatantly embarrassing you would go so far as to steal someone else's work.

Okay so I yelled at myself on my old account. Whoops. How embarassing