All Comments on 'Maria Ch. 01'

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jpalsgrjpalsgrover 10 years ago
Intregues

Good start, intend to follow and see how greatly she is transformed.

fanficwriter1fanficwriter1over 10 years ago
Not bad, but...

You need to work on your English. It doesn't appear to be your first language. Practice makes perfect, though, and I could follow most things well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great start.

Maria need a black bitch as a personal trainer to do her job right as a whore to customers plus how to satisfy women.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This story was very poorly written, with very poor grammar.

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