All Comments on 'Maria, Slut Wife Ch. 01'

She sounds like the perfect wife. Wait, that would be my wife, who has done everything in this story and more.

Another new author with a certain LW hit.

So I won't. You can't write. This was beyond ugly.

1 star

Now that's what I call a role model for every woman, more please and soon, 5* naturally. Maria's a heroine. Only complaint, why call her a slut? Men who do the same are studs, double standards are so last century.

I’m sorry but this was just plain old boring. No imagination or creativity nothing it was just plain nothing new just a complete waste of time writing. But the good thing is that it was good to see a new writer. But while I’m trying so hard as to not put you down lol . What you should of done is tried a different category first . These types of stories are basically dead at the moment yes you will get a few likes but that is it . The loving wife category has been swamped with these types of stories and you writing this at this time . It’s pointless these stories have flatlined or bombed or shuffled off or are ten a penny etc . They just aren’t worth writing at the moment. The only thing making it big in the loving wife category are BTB stories anything else is not worth writing. Ok sorry about that just to make it clear when you write your next story remember normally you write your story and base your story on the characters. But this site works differently you have to base your stories on what they do ok . ( you might have got away with it if you had tried the fetish category) . The reason is that first it helps the readers find what they are into easier. Second it helps build up confidence in the writer ( the more the bad reviews they get the more they end up giving up writing) that is why they prefer to do it this way so they don’t loose talented writers. So please your next story go try a different category and have fun finding which you are best at . You have got a talent so don’t waste your time with these dead stories unless you want to write a BTB story then have fun doing it . Just have fun finding your category ( personally I don’t think it’s loving wife category but hey you have got loads of different category’s to try so have fun finding out ) ok

yawn, yet more of the same crap, just a different day

You are a S.L.U.T. 👏👏🎉🎉🔥🔥

There is nothing to this story, but it was thankfully short.

Probably never again.

Your POV seems to be rambling. How are you narrating the story? From the husband's POV? No. From the Slut's POV? No. So, how are you describing the events that take place? It's an impossible situation. Who is relating her work and life history? Please don't continue.

True, the writing could use some improvement, but the story is very hot. Damn, I should have married my old friend Vivian, she would have been a great wife like Maria is.

2*

Dang every true cuckold would love to have her as his loving wife! She is truely a dream! Love to fuck others and still shares herself with her husband and he willingly lets her and encourages her to be as sluttly as she wants. Wish I had one like that

and smelly

I have the perfect marriage you describe. I want and need to be a complete whore with both men and women. It's not an arrangement that works for the great majority of marriages, but we thrive on it. Great story!

Your story included a dizzying number of sexual exploits by Maria. My wife found this story and showed it me. Or, as she said, “Rubbed my nose in it!” We especially enjoyed the focus on “semen collection”, including its direct deposit in Maria’s cunt, her capturing it and freezing it, and her reinjecting it into her womanhood. I can guarantee you there is nothing sexier that watching your wife cum on a turkey baster, as she squirts another man’s cum into her married cunt!

Like Maria with coworker Dave, my wife will often insist that a new lover “save it up” for a week or so, before she will give him her pussy. Some of her “cum harvests” have been remarkable. She only fucks men who are heavy cummers.

Your ending paragraph was about our favorite activity; face-sitting, after another man has cum in her. She grinds out multiple orgasms on my face. I usually shoot off, without any physical stimulation.

My wife is into both Yoga and Tantric Yoga, which involves giving her body to many other men, during the rituals. She is the sacred whore. This usually takes place at 3-day, weekend retreats. She collects the men’s lifegiving fluids, and I eat it, right in front of her and the other sacred whores. Usually that is right after she has just finished with each sex partner.

Solely through meditation, she throws herself into a heightened state of sexual awareness. She fucks each man for around 20 minutes and has about 20 orgasms! That is intense, for me: I’m sitting there with an erection, but not allowed to jerk off. She is constantly telling me that the other guy is the best sex partner she has ever had!

There is at story the Council of Wild Women site called “The Gift of Yoni Juice”, which describes the techniques my wife has trained me to perform. The most important thing about this Yoni worship is that my body, and especially my head, must always physically below her pussy, as I clean her. That is a sign of respect toward her Yoni.

Thus, some of our favorite positions are her face-sitting me. Or, me lying on my back beneath her as another men doggie fuck her, and their cum falls on my face. Or, with her in a chair and me on my knees below, licking her.

Finally, once she collected nearly a gallon of cum when she did a weekend gangbang. She froze it in small zip lock bags, which when thawed, would be mixed with precious, scented oils. I would “anoint”, brush that mixture on, her breasts, lips, pussy lips, before we went to bed each night. Of course, she would deny me sex until we had used up all the cum. And, during that time, her pussy was only available for Tantric ritual sex with other men.

We’d like to read more about Maria!

just another stupid whore and a wimp garbage story

1*

Excrement,pure & simple LP

*5* ..... Incredible..!!

I'm with the Bitchers on this one. Maria not only disrespects her husband, her lovers, the wives of her lovers, and everyone she is involved with, she doesn't even respect herself. Maria: get thee to a nunnery.