All Comments on 'Marie's Key Pt. 01: Heckin' Amazon'

Has your absence from amateur writing been because you’re a full time writer?

Everything in that story is stunning, the characters are are so very relatable. You set the scene so vividly to the extent that I could literally envisage myself bouncing up and down the lovely Scott. It’s a rare skill to be able to deposit others so thoroughly into a story so yeah there’s that. Far too often people write stories with characters who have a stilted vocabulary, whether that’s their internal monologue or dialogue with others. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and am definitely looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)