All Comments on 'Marie's Photo Shoot'

As long as it's controled you can have fun, but this is something that could bite you in the ass, have fun.

Yawn. Several words misused - where instead of were - where is the erotic aspect? Her hair had been dyed black not died black and why explain that. White cotton panties doesn't do it for me.

A nice story, lacks over-the-top pounding sex which most males on this site seem to prefer. I liked it, it gives you emotions and things to explore if you want to do that.

Sorry, but this doesn't really go anywhere. The description is very matter of fact, and there's no sense of tension as Marie exposes her breasts for the first time to someone other than her boyfriend (which makes the public flashing at the close even more out of character). Have you considered a sequel, in which she finally sheds her panties as well?

Writer not very consistent. First she had white panties on then pink ones and again back to white, maybe she did a few nudes as well.

Why did his girlfriend need to pose for this guy anyway? Photographer had two other models already and what were the pictures for? Was this some calendar or just his own private collection?

The story quite accurately depicts how a young man behaves & what he feels, when he starts to exhibit voyeuristic behavior.

(Trust me I know. Been there done it.)

I like the story in that it reminded me of an experience with a coworker. I had this coworker who's husband was in an other country's military. The duration of their separations were astounding. Normally she was very reserved but one day she was very open and honest to me about how horny she'd get and how sex toys seldom lasted a month before they broke. She was having trouble with our work id camera, that she runs. She got me to pose. I countered and thought it better if she posed to check it were fixed. We did and right after I took the first photo I asked if she wanted one for her husband. It was like a switch went off on her and she suddenly flashed me for the photo. I had to adjust to get her chest in the image. This was stressful as exciting as this happened in the middle of our work day with coworkers and clients all around and our doors were wide open. We took two more and then stopped. No sooner than we stopped when a customer came in. Only luck kept her from being seen as he didn't seem to notice that she was against the wall putting her clothes back together as I dealt with him. A month later she got her husband's response, he wanted more. For a while I was her, at work photographer, for pictures of her to send to her husband. They were usually done before work or after hours as she was usually topless in them. I wonder how things turned out for them. I hope they are still happily together

Showed boobs for McDonald's drinks, not hot fudge sundae? I hope free refills were included.