All Comments on 'Marilyn at Midnight Ch. 01'

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mistressenariemistressenarieabout 6 years ago
Don't make us wait long for chapter 2

Excellent start! Keep it up. A couple of minor grammatical errors, but I'm impressed so far! I can't wait to read what happens next.

zooliciouszooliciousabout 6 years ago
anticipating

Can't wait for Part 02.

Enjoying it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Too short

Such a tease!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Josie

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