All Comments on 'Marion's Story Ch. 01'

Can't wait for chapter 2

Great start, Cant wait to see how it continues

I’m waiting for the next chapter

Another top notch story from you. Always love your work. Can't wait for more 😊

So much true emotion and love. You truly are a gifted writer - and the sex scene with Molly was so perfect and sweet. I can't wait to read Chapter II.

xoxo,

Di

PS. I have a friend who went to Dodge City Junior College back in the 70's and he said the whole town only has two traffic lights. Is that true?

Second reading.....

i love your stories, this one is also top ten.

You are a gifted story teller. Now you need to learn to write. I did and now I'm working on my second novel. Prose is art and needs to be refined until it is perfect.

Best wishes and good luck.

Oh Please No! First April gets a free pass after maliciously ruining Mimi's relationships and trying to ruin her life. Now She sells out to corporate bitch and then fucks her, two things she swore she would never do in earlier chapters?! Sorry, I was really enjoying this story but that just broke the plot, I can't even bear to read the rest.

Great story, Cav!

I would have loved to be out when I was playing in a band. It still didn't feel safe enough where I was back then. Thanks for the fantasy!

Go to the police. Dumb

Loved the story, great job!