Marion's Story Ch. 17

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There were going to be many more bumps in our road through life but everybody has those.

Thanks to all the people who contacted me and for all the kind comments on the story. For the time being this is the end, although....insert maniacal laughter, maybe later.

Thanks again for the lovely comments, and even the not so lovely, they are all valid.



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SexySenior56SexySenior5618 days ago

This was a great series. This is the second time I've read all chapters (the first time was when you first published it). Loved the characters, loved the sub-plots. You demonstrated a solid knowledge of music. Having said all that you have to find a better editor for your work. The typo, misspellings, poor works choice, and grammatical errors seriously detract from a wonderful tale.

FernVillaFernVilla4 months ago

Great story. My only criticism is the blasé attitude of the characters to use the wrong pronoun for Mimi.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Gloria says "All I can say is...I think this is more about your insecurities and feelings of inadequacy."

No fucking duh? Every girlfriend mimi has had cheated on her. No one validates her gender identity. Molly STILL misgenders mimi regularly. she's constantly used for sex but no one will commit to her in a relationship. So obviously she's going feel inadequate and insecure all the time. She moved to LA to be with her fiancé and the band members, but once they move... They all fuck off and leave her alone? She's lonely. They're neglecting her. Jesus fucking christ, what aren't they understanding about this.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This is the best story of this Genre I have ever read, It touches my heart on so many levels. Please write more. and thank you. I can read alot of personal angst in this story (or a fantastic imagination) so thank you for being vulnerable. I wish i could give this a 10, Jackie1958

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Absolutely beautiful story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

The_Winter_WitchThe_Winter_Witch6 months ago

Loved this one of your best stories

coyote62coyote629 months ago

I've read it three times and loved it. Great series. I spent all day reading it. Thank you for sharing.

thruholewizardthruholewizardabout 1 year ago

great story! Like all great stories,it ended too soon loved it and am hoping you have more like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolutely lovely story

cumguzzlingslutmachinecumguzzlingslutmachineover 1 year ago

Ended up binging this in one day. Beautiful story.

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