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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice!

!This+ golden apple story, really get it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Err this one seems out of place compared to the other stories in the series

And I find that I prefer to hear more about Cadence since she's a fun character, even when she's not the main subject of the story. Seeing only a mere mention of her in this story was rather disappointing.

Briar seems a bit boring in comparison and Mark seems to have lost his thunder in this one. Not to mention, this feels like it's going to have a continuation related to the Purple Haze which I think would've been better off concluded all in one go in this story. Writing a sequel to something that sounds so inconsequential seems rather redundant at this point, given the way you've written the other stories.

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Hello, I call myself markydaysaid, which is supposed to be a play on Marquis de Sade, who I have no real connection to other than we are both interested in perverted things and seem to be mostly disliked by our peers. I mostly like to draw, you can find my illustrations on ...