by island_man
Wrong category unless I missed the Erotic Couplings part. Interesting story tho. I hope the next part is better.
I like your writing style....it's very easy to read. The premise is good but this guy being a total horn dug seems excessive and the bouncing back and forth between realistic survival mode and him being a corny asshole is jarring. I really feel sorry for the girl as she is not likely to survive her wound, no matter how well he cleaned it, without antibiotics. I just hope he isn't going quietly insane with his Gilligan Island fantasy.
Great start to a lost at sea love story. Hope there is more to come. Well done 5++stars
I like the story... But after reading the comments... I notice that you just left it there!!! WHY??? Please finish the story....
Some interesting character building here, would be a shame to let it go to waste! Hope further chapters are in the works…would like to see where you’re planning to go!