All Comments on 'Marrage Games'

Spelling mistake on the title. Shoot me dead.

This story is good but it should be in the non-consent category. The names Anjali and Priya are sometimes interchanged, creating confusion and detract from full enjoyment of the story.

Fair comment

Descriptions are highly erotic but over all full of improbabilities spoiling all the efforts.

Oh Nayna. You had me in the first half. If I wanted probable reality, I wouldn't write fantasies.

Mostly very good. I think there may be a cultural gap or just my personal preference though. The hairy smelly stuff really killed the vibe. Otherwise a fun fantasy.

Forced sexual assault is inexcusable

Was it though? Read it again.

Amazing will be a small word. Beautifully written. Loved every line every word.

Priya begins to undo the petticoat and opens it to reveal her breasts to my eyes. You have got to be kidding. Petticoat is worn on the lower side not upper

Thanks for letting me know. Would love to hear more if you have any other ladies fashion tips