All Comments on 'Marriage'

Tomorrow you get the papers for physical abuse, and you also get arrested for the same reason. All she has to do is call the cops and they will take pictures of her bruises.

Lovely the whole way through.

The comment about abuse is dumb. Of course she could run to the cops, but marriage is about trust. He trusts her to keep the secret. Same as she trusts him not to hurt her "for real".

This is horrid

It’s as simple as not looking it up, not clicking on the story. If you don’t understand BDSM then do not, I repeat do not, read BDSM content. It is not meant for you. It was stated by the “narrator” that this is an arrangement in their relationship. They are in a BDSM relationship where he is the obvious dominant, she even comments that a bracelet he gave her means he owns her. This is not abuse. This is a BDSM scene being played out by two consenting adults. Grow up and learn to see beautiful artistry for what it is.

This is beautiful and beautifully written.

Very well done.