All Comments on 'Marrying My Anal Wife Pt. 01'

Good premise.

But... Did his cock really have to be 10-inches?

Needed more inn the way of foreplay/preliminaries. Some preliminary making out. Then serious making out.

She was a virgin. She'd never seen/touched/fondled a cock before. Surely she'd want to admire it. Touch it. Play with his cock and balls, learning what he liked.

Needed some tit involvement. He'd never seen her naked tits -- ir anyone's naked tits. Surely he's want to revel in them.

Some fingering her pussy before he began to lick it, would have been nice. He could have given her her first orgasm that way before using his mouth.

Nevertheless, four stars.

Sooo fucking erotic. My dick is steel hard as well. Sheila is an obvious dream girl for any of us guys that are partial to anal.

Please don't take this lovely story and drag into the cuck dumpster.

she married a closeted fag? Who else prefers a dirty, dry, gender-neutral asshole to their wife's pussy?

Well written and enjoyably erotic... Even if, before revelling in anal pleasure, they'd already done more than enough to become parents!!

Great beginning. Keep it up

ok, i looove to fuck a woman in her ass...

Excellent job. I hope to see more.

I won't even say this is a good first attempt since that would be demeaning. You write as one who is a seasoned erotica author instead of a first timer. Look forward to more stories.

Absolutely divine writing. I was a virgin when I got married - and this would have been my ultimate honeymoon.

Very well written and sensual.

Loved it

XXX

Interesting premise.

But there should have been at least some nervousness/trepidation.

Sex simply atarted too abruptly. And continued too abruptly.

Three stars.

I liked this a lot, but it needs better editing. There are spelling errors and missing words.

Great story. Could use a little editing. Enjoyed it.

Nice story, but no athletic scholarships in the Ivy League.