by arvint
You are definitely hitting the center ring of the target!
ok...
Hot stuff! Please continue.
My vote is to continue.
Amazing. You rock! Oooh...go on!
Your first two chapters were great; it's time for another.
Please continue with your writing.It’s a great l reaf
Thanks for keeping it simple. Love it please continue
Great story. Please continue with a chapter 3 looking into their lives or epilogue if this is completed. I like that you keep it simple (focused on the couple having fun and making love