All Comments on 'Marta's Day Dream Pt. 04'

What I like most about this whole story is the idea of the power relationship actually benefiting both in real ways. The idea of the structure of the relationship being a way to better both parties. That is my favorite type of bdsm relationship. Too many barely bother to say the sub gets what they want, while not showing the sub is getting anything; not needs met, not protection, not basic human decency. Many authors are accused of writing abuse because while the power may be an imbalance, the story still requires balance, and they fail. So far, you are suceeding. I don't know if you'll stay on the softer side or get more intense, either is good. Whatever you do, just keep the story in balance.

Speed it up will you. I want to read about her spankings. Good Gosh I'm on edge. Oh please and thank you 😊

I’ll see if I can pick up the pace :)