All Comments on 'Marvin's Garden'

I just hope it was real life. I wanted you to take her fat ass and fuck her too the balls fist time, no lube and fill that fat ass full of cum! Other than that it was GREAT

Wow I really loved this read . Every man's fantasy !

Very good, except I couldn't really get into it because everything moved too fast. We're barely getting to know the characters, everyone is tentative about one another, and suddenly he's stripping alongside her and then they're kissing and suddenly he finds some Dom side inside himself that's never been referred to. Individually, I want all of those things to happen, I'm not against those story elements themselves, just not in such quick succession and with such little build-up.