All Comments on 'Mary and her Lovers Ch. 03'

sharing may be fine but humiliation..forget it..id have flat busted her ass for calling me bitch boy and if she thought I was being subservient to her she could kiss my ass.and shaving her pussy all that would have done is get her fucked by me ..and if her lover wanted to eat my cum so much better ..but her leading me around by the hand and telling me what to do and doing to me what she did to him in front of what is nothing technically speaking but a fuck no fucking way ..hed be out the door on his ass as would she if she thought a real man would go for that shit ...bring it back to reality or put it in another classification

Sharing migh be fun but humiliation... Sorry wrong direction. Like your stories up until this point. I'm all for the slut wife and the swapping and sharing but the humiliation just loses it and crosses the line into Fetish. Sorry

This will be my last comment in regards to this series you are posting. What I tried to say yesterday was confirmed by your posting today. When the cuckold/sharing stories go down the humiliation/degradation highway which they almot all do they belong in another genre(Fetish). Sorry but there are few people that read LW's that find this erotic. Like I said your free to do whatever floaats your boat but don't be surpised at the reaction. Good luck with this

I will repeat what's been said, open marriage is fun to those who participate. This husband never said he wanted to evolve rapidly into cuck domination bullshit. The game, the fun is over. Now you're in the wrong category, post ch 4 in fetish.

Really enjoying your story and you are taking it the direction I think most cuckold couples lean to eventually. After many years as a cuckold I have decided that many cuckolds are craving for submission, and what is more submissive than giving your wife to another man. After that, submission turns to humiliation, especially when you watch a real man pleasure your wife for hours rather than the 5 minutes you usually last.

But you're moving into the cuck humiliation aspect of it far too quickly. I've read several well done stories on the same theme, and the best of them moved slowly, with a lot of introspection by the husband, and a lot of communication with the wife.

At this point, Sweetie is playing a game, with Hubby as a tentative participant. She is NOT yet a dominatrix, she is trying out a dominatrix role with Hubby's compliance - but he has been given the tool to stop the game from progressing beyond his tolerance. Bull, of course, does NOT know this.

A lot will depend on the couple's discussion and negotiation once they are alone again! A MAJOR test will happen if Bull decides to assert control over Hubby! If Sweetie allows that (worse if she encourages it) rather than letting Bull know that Hubby is HER 'bitch boy' then Hubby will have a SERIOUS set of decisions to make!

was a fun story,, you have just lost that, sliding into the boring stereotype crap

Liked the start but going too far the wrong way.l

You've managed to take a good reading stroy and turn it into trash. Congrats to you. Why waste everyones time with , the typical wimpy husband, and the bitch wife scene. There are hundreds of those stories out. Why can't some one be original and keep the story line. There w2as no hint of cockholding in chapter1 or2. So, why ruin chapter 3. Damn! what a waste. GO figure!

How is this an 'open' marriage? I can't see it as a 'Loving Wife' story if the 'openness' of the marriage only goes one way, and the husband is treated in a derogatory manner.

If that's your kink, good on you, but don't put it in the 'Loving Wives' story, it just makes you out to be deluded.

Ignore the haters and keep writing what you want. I'll keep reading.

That could be so damned fun. Just wouldn't want it to be full time domination, better a once in a while event would be great.

Looking forward to the continuation.

It is very erotic to get your wife with her lovers load still inside.

cuckolding can take directions that do not include sex and it's not automatically a fetish.

These stories are so intense. 5 stars, more if it were possible. Don't understand the silly comments, some people !