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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not bad for a start

I like where you are going with this. Keep bringing out the characters and let the story build. The journey is half the fun as getting there. Keep up the good work and I know you will be getting 5* before you know it! Thanks for your time and efforts.

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You can call me Izzy :) I'm an English teacher that writes stories (that are hopefully enjoyable).

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