All Comments on 'Mary Caught Peeping'

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modelnude4umodelnude4uover 10 years ago
so real

Seemed to real, and not over the top as some stories can be. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fabulous Writing!

The story was seamless, the suspense built up well, inhibitions were lost, and conventional thinking was thrown aside.

All of us, sometime in our lives, have witnessed something similar in a campground or drive in movie. The fact that a husband and wife, together, watch another couple copulate was very erotic.

Your other story with Conner was equally exciting! Your restraint in both stories is appreciated and well employed as a device to increase the sexual tension.

I remember watching Mr. Roger's Neighborhood twenty years ago with my kids. Well, if there had been a Mrs. Roger's, she would have been bent over the sink watching the neighbors shag while taking it from behind from Mr. Rogers.

The reason these stories are so good, is because they are actually attainable by any middle aged, conventional, middle class couple!

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