by Johnadi
This story made me go weak in the knees. I don't know how but, the plot was terrifying. Still, I liked it. Good Luck for contest.
Really enjoyed the story, and good luck in the contest. Yes there were a few spelling errors, but didn't detract from being an entertaining read. xx
to bad he cannot spell, and know the difference
between HERE, AND HEAR!!
Really?! It was almost a good bit of fiction. But learn to write, study a little about homonyms, and get an editor.