All Comments on 'Mary's Control Ch. 01 - Initiation'

loved it! cant wait for next chapter!

This was a great first chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next.

What a wonderful start to what should be a fun and entertaining story. Love the characters and the way it is unfolding. Great story telling and a 5 star for the enjoyment. Thanks for publishing it. Cheers

Another good first chapter to another good story. can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Pappasleaze!

Great first chapter, Mary, and looking forward to the development of the plot - 5 stars from me xx