All Comments on 'Mason Ch. 03'

Please let her get pregnant before he dies.

He's worked himself into an early grave because he married a woman who doesn't love him as much as he loves her. Wow...I've heard that a person can worry themself to death...James is a great guy. It will be a shame to kill him off for conveince to Mason's delimma, imo. But I'm just here for the ride. Great job.

The only problem I have is when suddenly the story switches to the other person. Its easy to catch on but could you maybe add some extra spacing or a line a star or something as a warning? I really am loving all of your stories and can't wait to read more

Thanks for telling me that. I write as I "think" and I know what I mean lol. I'll try to keep that in mind.

James is a good guy he knew what he wanted and stay with her.

Luv this guy don't kill off make HIM into Werewolf;)

just wondering if james is heading down a slippery psychological medical slop why not make them get a divorce he gets together with the nurse kim an toni gets together with mason. its like ya characters have been saying through out the story one moment in time can affect the rest of your life no matter how small. well thats what ive been getting from it, anyway loving it an can't wait to read more from you.

is anyone else having problems with the rating system?

I love your stories. I have no clue as to how you are going to work your magic for Mason. Don't kill James, let the baby issue be the straw that kills there marriage. Kim is there to pick up the pieces or possibly turn him in to a vamp. Just don't kill him!!!

Kill James! And, don't put him into a relationship with Kim! He loves Toni. I say you let him live, Toni gets pregnant, and James dies from a neurological disorder while Toni is pregnant. That way, she'll need someone (Mason) to lean on...

Yes. I'm having a problem with voting. Giving you a 5 lol

Don't kill James. I like him; he's so good for Toni. I know this is Mason's love story, but please don't kill him...let it be stress!

Having problems with the rating.. sucks.. But 5 stars from me.

.. and i say, kill James but let her have his baby anyway.

I just want to say you're the best. I only come to this website to read your stories. You're very good at what you do, and this story so far is the bomb LOL. I am sorry Mason is going through this whole drama, but please please please do not kill James. Let the fates give Mason a new mate or something like that. At least let James a few more years to have his wish granted; to have the baby he so wanted, give him the joy to see that baby grow up. I know you will come up with some, but don't kill James :(

Saddens me what is about to happen....James doesn't deserve that even though life is unfair...

and while I don't want James to die. I'm conflicted - Mason is a good guy and so is James. I'll leave it to you to work it out.

i'm gonna sob. I love your writing & all of your stories, but Mason doesn't deserve Toni the way that James does. Every girl wants a guy who will love them in the way James does and he's so sweet. Why does he get the unhappy ending; death, when all that Mason gets is a slap on the wrist before an asshole to his mate since he didn't think she could compare to his best friend's mate and then he gets her in the end. That's just not fair. It's really not fair at all. Like others are saying, let James at least get to see Toni pregnant and the child be born and raise it for a little while before he has to die. He deserves that much respect in the least.

I know this is just a character and just a story, your story, but it's really getting me worked up. =/

I'm Team James all the way...Mason can get her back after James has his 30 yrs.

the way you want. If you had planned to kill off James (whom I love), do so. You shouldn't let other ppl dictate your story for you. I think you're a good writer and we are your audience, not your co-writers. Don't change anything to please anyone.

I love all characters involved, so I will be reading and loving this story no matter which direction it takes.

I honestly don't see James making it past this chapter and I hate that, but what can I do? It's not my fiction, I'm just along for the ride. I will say that I LOVE how James is with Toni and how she is with him. Her hovering over him and taking over at the hospital was so darn adorable! I really wish James could get his kid and see him/her grow, I'm going to be really saddened when he's no longer with us. <- Jeez, I sound like he's real. That just shows how easily you made the character great to where readers feel a connection with him...bravo!

On another note: I know this story isn't nearly over, but I'm really curious about Eustace and his mate. I really think he knows more about her OR him (I'd like to see one of your characters be gay, less that's just not your thing) than he is letting on o_O

My entire post didn't show up and I'm too tired to retype the rest, be back in the AM.

dont kill james. just let him live happily ever after wid toni. its sumthing tht quite reflects reality. and let mason have another mate. let kim be his mate or sumthing like that. but if u kill james just coz mason is the protagonist or sumthing of the story, it would be plain plain sad.

If it is time for James to leave the story, so be it. He loves Toni too much to ever let her go willingly. In life and fiction there are many exits stage left.

Mason and Toni need to have their convergence with whatever it brings.

I don't care how he goes but he needs to.

i agree w some of the comments. Dont let james die just to make mason mated. A man must take a responsible for his action right. But if you are going to write differently its ur story. Btw if i am not mistaken, in ethan story, eustace is an old human that does the work with vamp clients. Am i wrong - nee

I did not see this mysterious sickness coming at all, I pray that James does not get terminally ill and can not make children in order for Mason to get with Toni. Make him wait as Ethan did and see if his mate will finally come around-not Toni...

James cannot die, that would be cruel!