All Comments on 'Mason Ch. 11'

I like the way their romance is progressing slowly. By the time Mason tells her that he is a vampire, she'll love him enough not to care. I know that's what he's hoping for. But what will that information mean for Jamie? Mason will want to turn his mate but will Katrina want to leave her son behind?

5 stars as usual

Wow I always end up doing my Snoopy Dance with your stories... Once again you are the best and can't wait for Ch.12 and your other stories to come out..... Kelleigh0127

Write more faster!! Love it!!

Is the man....enuff said.

Mason is doing that damn thang!!! I can't to read about how that date went.

It is a beautiful thing that a sistah is being wooed............in the truest sense of the word. Boy, if life imitated art we'd all be in serious trouble.

Can't wait for the next installment. I miss James too.

Thanks

That's right Alpha_Marm! It is wooing isn't it. I really love the clean way in which Kalamazoo writes. I don't think I've ran into any grammatical/spelling errors in her stories - or at least not that I can remember or that are worth mentioning. I'm also enjoying how this story is developing.

It keeps getting better and better. Great Story!

Kalamazoo707: You sure can tell a story! You're definitely improving with each one you write. The grammar has greatlly improved, and the story line pulls you right in with the characters. GREAT work!

You are just excellent! Frickin' excellent!

Excellent as always!

You absolutely, positively ROCK! I've been a fan of your stories on here for quite some time now, and I'm glad to see that you're actually publishing some of your work, too! You make me cry and laugh out loud as I read your stories! I didn't care for Mason much during the Ethan series, but you've given him so much depth now, I'm rooting for him and Toni all the way!

Let's see....Jamie likes Mason. Ben and Barbara likes Mason. Even james dad likes mason....well it is time for Mason to take and make the next move because Toni clearly is not! Yes, he gave her a real kiss! She should recognize it for what it is.....a romantic next step! Yeah for Mason!

Barbara is sneaky, and pushy but I absolutely love her in these last two chapters... loving Mason more and more too