All Comments on 'Mass Effect - A Hero Rises Ch. 26'

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Theseeker333Theseeker333over 3 years ago
Oh yeah

Well that is one way to deal with Jack also epic fight on horizon! Liara is next wooo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Every once in awhile you develope a plot hole that bothers me. You reamed out a civy that had no training and was alone for not fighting. Yet nothing was said about Amanda and her crew, who admitted that they were out gunned so they just hunkered down. They didn't even join the fight when Shephard and his crew started wiping out the collectors.

Another point, don't people generally judge you on your actions, what has gotten up everyone's butt with the black red and gold. If they save your life, why spit on them?

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