by asianbirdwatcher
Loved this story, please continue with the next chapter as soon as possible. Definitely 5 stars, a great wank
I loved the white raceplay talk at the beginning, but then you didn’t add it to the rest of the remaining story.
Very bland. No sex with mom. Maybe the next chapter will be better. Maybe the son gets to do the ladies??
A lot of typo's and spelling errors. At one point she was having her mouth fucked but could also see her son, not physically possible. If this was your first attempt at writing then I would forgive some of the above. You may want to seek an editor to help as you gain more experience of writing. Good luck.
This was excellent. Literally my dream dynamic, and its white/asian too, so hot. Please continue!
Well, i am now gonna rub one out. maybe twice. i am not asian, but the thought of being watched really makes me warble like a bird.
thank you and Hana ho!