All Comments on 'Massage with Elizabeth'

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JoeehartleyJoeehartleyover 3 years ago
Loved it

Now I want a massage.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Something's missing

This is taking a good long time and I'm enjoying it. I express myself and nicely slaps my butt, reminding me of the noise. I agree and she continues on my legs.

Those 3 lines make no sense together.

I liked the storyline but would have preferred more details on the penetration and a what followed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Prostate

Please check the correct spelling of prostate. I don't know if it's country idiom that adds the second "R", but the letter does not exist in the latter half of the word.

All I can say as a reader is that poor spelling puts me off and destroys a story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I stopped reading after you kept saying "butt cheeks" again and again...

Your story seemed hot but the wording was meh.

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