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Great story!

So it’s never the having, it’s the getting that’s important, the thrill of the hunt, the first victory.

When we have, we get bored with it. We want to pursue the new, not the old. We don’t want the bullshit of periods, hormonal crying, mood swings, obsessing about weight. We don’t want to deal with them taking a nasty, smelly shit or their morning breath. We want perfection....at all times, right?

Sorry author but the devil, they say, is in the details. Women aren’t perfect. They are human: they get tired, worn down. They throw up, have gross dumps, pimples, hair, sweat....that’s what makes them perfect. What you write isn’t erotic because it’s plastic. Perfect....and it misses the point because no one is perfect.