All Comments on 'Master! Master! Pt. 01'

This was excellent! Great read, characters and good build-up to a sweet release! (lol). Looking forward to more of this, it's a bit of a 'thing' for me ... Blush...

Thanks!

Master... Momo needs part 2...

Noooo! Don't wanna go to the Vet!

Oh my god, you have nailed the cat persona. Clinging to the counter in the bathroom when he tries to get her in the shower stall, wrapping arms and legs around him to get away from the water.

I hope there is another chapter, just for the exciting adventure of trying to put shoes on her! Anybody with a very young child knows that struggle. As well as their ability to somehow LOSE said footwear.

Most entertaining, thank you very much!

The term is "nekomimi" (meaning cat ears or cat-eared), although "neko" is also acceptable.

Great story overall, loved it and can't wait for more!

Love your sense of humor. (Man, I'm glad I had her fixed. LOL!) I can just see her batting him back & forth like a cat toy, hysterical! A few oopsies here & there, for example, this story is written in first person (me, mine, I), but she's speaking in third person (he, she, it, his, hers, its). Missing a word here & there,too, you would probably benefit from a beta reader to catch some of those.

I was hooked from the opening paragraph, when he gets an eyeful of girl butt instead of cat butt. It was clear this was going to be a fun one.

A new perspective on getting pussy!

Liked it, will continue!

Nice start ,Not sure why he had to act so scarred of her. but I like it.

One commentor mentioned that the story was in the first person, but Momo spoke in the third person. I think that is a feature, and not a bug. It is a common troupe in naive, but super sexy, magic girl stories to have the girl speak in the third person. Also, if you play Skyrim or any other The Elder Scrolls game, the cat people (Khajiit) all speak in third person.