All Comments on 'Master! Master! Pt. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
OMG SO GOOOOD!

i have reread the first 9 chapters twice now and now find myself waiting for the next one.

i really hope you keep this story going for the long haul it is one of if not THE best ero story i have ever read.. the best part being that it actually has a story and a GOOD story at that. im dying to know how the cdc plays out maybe the cdc guy or someone else working there is going threw the same and hiding it? i hope they get the fox and chinchilla back. a scene with Lorraine and her piller mens first time back in the sack after the trip might be good. id like to see him have to face another deer and have to sort out his feelings for Penelope someday. turning a chicken might be cool, would she lay eggs? no matter what happens this story has already jumped to the top of my reading/cant wait for the next chapter list and will stay there thanks for everything and i hope you are enjoying writing it as much as i do reading it

keep up the great story, i will do my best not to ask you to rush it out lol (sorry couldn't resist) ill comment again next chapter thanks again

-nanashi

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Your gift

Love your work, for someone who doesn't know what's going to happen next, you're doing a fantastic job. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I lost track of this story but luckily had saved it to a special bookmark in my computer. Now I'm caught up on how much of the story I've missed so far and I'm absolutely loving the way things are going. But I do hope that things work out for the animals that they did transform and themselves. So bring on the next chapter lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Amazing

This story is great, better than any other I have read. I love how you balance the lewd bits with character development and an actual plot, that is too often lacking.

Keep up the great work man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Never commented before

Last two chapters went downhill quick, but after negative comments were posted, I was hoping you'd right the ship. Nope, this chapter I could barely read. Such a shame, 'cause it was a pretty great story until chapter 8. Used to like the MC, but now he's become a total shit stain.

Also, the sex was usually lame and lacking, but the adorable characters easily made up for it. Hope things turn out well for 'em because I'm done with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
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love the story. has a few grammar mistakes tho. yeet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Amusing

I think it is a good story. Keep it up. I like some of the funny situations too.

Fucked_up86Fucked_up86almost 4 years ago
I'm done

You turned a nice romance into a shitty cartoon.

Covert43Covert43almost 4 years ago

ALL GLORY TO THE DEER GOD

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[22.11.22]

Shit like this is Y U RRAWK!

We came to a stop at an anaconda display. The scaly noodle was dozing on a tree branch under the light of a heat lamp.

"You got buns, hun'?" Lorraine asked.

"Ugh, I hate that song. Ok, it's a female. I'm up."

As we played, we walked past a pair of humanoid peacocks. The male had bright, colorful feathers growing from his scalp instead of hair, with similar feathers growing from the base of his spine as a tail. Each feather was the size of a canoe. He looked like an even more flamboyant version of Steve. He was Liberace's wet dream.

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Danté on acid or absinthe? Damn, boredom is dangerous. 5 stars LOL

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

"nympho cat"

momo best and also why i started reading

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I bookmarked your profile YEARS ago. I think I started to read this story years ago and dropped it for some reason or another, but I'm so freaking happy that I saved the bookmark, because this story so far is sublime. I've only read up to this point so far, but I do hope it has a good conclusion. And the fact you're still continuing your Infinite series gives me hope that story is even better than this one.

Pat yourself on the back, this one is one worth saving.

DeeFisher123DeeFisher12319 days ago

Ok..... CDC.......we'll see.......

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