All Comments on 'Master Mesmer's Hypnotic Haunt'

I want to be a slave.

Perfectly timed for the season. I loved how you uniquely told each girl's adventure and fall into hypnotic submission. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Fantastic!

Please do more. We need a series.

I LOVE this. This was so fucking hot to read. Well done!

Loved the story and the 3 different ways they get seduced

Good time and great ideas! You have a lot of clever ideas that makes this one work very well. I would maybe get an editor due to some typos, but this was still awesome.