All Comments on 'Master of Coin Pt. 01'

OMG! That twist at the end is so good. I mean it sucks for him, but love what has happened.

I gotta say the "in a nutshell" stuff got old real quick.

Anonymous, thanks for letting me know. It doesn’t crop up much after the first chapter. I’ll probably remove it in a future edit.

AlexiaAlexander, plenty more twists to come.

Like the first part a lot!

Love this first part!

Where is the sex?

Catlover69, the next update should be out shortly with some sex content.

Neat, ever read a quest called Family Co8ns?

Yes, I have read that quest. The mechanism behind the story is a big inspiration for this quest, although it goes in a very different direction- less wish fulfillment and more comedy of errors, for one.

Will give it another chapter. The bullying angle is tiring.

Why don't people with gay fantasies put these stories in the right category? The entire sex change thing... If they started as male and you have them have sex with other men... You're gay and you just aren't smart enough or introspective enough to admit it.

Now that was a fun twist.