All Comments on 'Master of Coin Pt. 02'

Liking the story so far, keep it up.

The first chapter was a funny ending, and this chapter was really interesting.

I'm loving it so far!

What I wonder is how "locked" the coin makes that relationship. Can a friend coin stop someone from moving 'upwards' ?

This is a very interesting story.

okay absolutely love this story kinda sad to see olivia go though.

Timtom2, the coins and how they work will eventually get explained.

That's a damn interesting approach to MC: alter the timeline so that the relationship happened naturally.

I expected it would be explained, I was only hypothesizing, maybe driving conversation a little.

Tomtom12,

No worries, all good.

Ugh all this whiny beta MC and silly drama shit. And his "power" is coins that he has no control over. Very boring. He's just force-fed situations and has to deal with the fallout and we have to listen to him whine about it the whole way. Great. It reminds me a little of the It's History story. I wonder if he'll get Dawn or if everything just gets more and more fucked up.