All Comments on 'Master of Elements Ch. 06: Aether'

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TengridTengridover 1 year ago

The sex is super-hot, but I'm also just fascinated by this story! Like, can they NOT take the fight to the Enemy quite yet? I want more scenes of training, more minor skirmishes, maybe some teambuilding and figuring out how these five strong personalities can work best together. It'll be a real shame if this story sets up such a cool world and cast, and then just sprints to the finish line!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is an outstanding story with outstanding sex scenes, incredibly well done. I'll very much look forward to the next chapter.

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I have been writing erotic stories for my own entertainment for many years, originally mainly BDSM and 'taboo' related but these days largely in the mind control genre. I thought it might be time to publish a few. All feedback appreciated. Just to add that while I find misogy...