All Comments on 'Master of Elves Ch. 01'

Good start!!

All, I forgot to mention there is a detailed world map on my patreon. Link in profile. Free only. I also submitted it to Lit as art, but it's still pending. I'll mention this in future chapters

I'm in. I'd like to see him meet the Elves.

Looking forward to many more chapters.

This is an interesting start. I look forward to see where it goes

ok, good start. no missed edits or clumsy vocab. um, intelligent barbarian? make the backstory cover it. so..keep going!

Thanks anon for feedback on backstory. Good call.

I have 4 chapters pending. I submitted the first 3 at the same time, but lit admins are taking their time.. I didn't mean to keep everyone hanging on the Astra scene. Hopefully it pops up soon.

I'm all in, Pease carry on with the tale sir.

Loking it so far, there are so many possibilities....definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

A very good start. Thanks for your time and imagination.