All Comments on 'Master of Sins Ch. 04'

Will you please make the rest of the characters of this story longer than one fucking page long. It makes it to where the reader's say to hell with this story.

i know what your saying there anon, and i've put serious thought into it. next chapter will have alot to happen, i'm hoping for at least 3 pages

Lol, very creative. I liked it, though yes i would appreciate longer chapters. haha.

And your posting schedule is just as bad as ME Hydra. lol.

Can't wait till the next one.

Never thought of a sloth demon quite that way. Bile eater. Great creativity. I also prefer linger was just getting into it when poor until next time... Awww...

But its your story so go with what seems best for the characters and flow. Also love the attitude of Maggie easygoing yet total gamer mode. Love it.

Keep up the good work

David