All Comments on 'Master of the Game'

by SwtMagnolia

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A good story but...

A good story but the bad grammar was a headache. It was a little distorting from the content of the story. Other than that I really enjoyed your story and how you make more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Ready for part 2

but please do something about the grammer. Otherwise I loved the story and would love to find someone to play with like that.

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