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by kelmag

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good beginning!

Actually, the opening half-page or so was a bit "iffy", but the remainder turns out to be appealing. (And I'm not usually a BDSM fan.) This could be a very interesting story.

-- KK in Texas

NEthingGozeNEthingGoze8 months ago

Intriguing setup, good characters, excellent cliffhanger, fun. I look forward to whatever nefarious things she has in store for him.

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