All Comments on 'Master PC - Trust Ch. 03'

Short, but nicely done. I'll certainly look forward to the next chapters to see how the relationships build. Unintended consequences are always fun!

I look forward to every installment. I hope it continues through many more chapters.

I think it would be so hot if he made it so Andrea had to ask permission before orgasming. Sexy story.

chapter one, Andrea is his wife, chapter three, girlfriend, great story but so long between chapters, you forgot yourself info about your characters

I know I mixed up the wife/girlfriend; I did check an earlier draft, but it was one that didn't have that change in it. C'est la vie. I'm working on the next chapter, and certainly want to have it up more quickly than this one was!

ya the wife/ GF thing was a little distracting, even the neighbors went the same way. but why did he loose his erection when andrea gave him the 'second coming' ? and John closed the curtains, after the leave them open program. Still great reading. don't mind me.

"John became aware of me watching a few moments later, when he adjusted his stance and glanced up from his girlfriend's ass for a moment"

Nice twist to this master pc stuff. Amazing story too. Pls continue

Absolutely love this, looks like another chapter isn't coming anytime soon though

This is one of those stories that has all the hallmarks of being a true classic. Too bad the author dropped off because I would have loved to see where the story was going.

Far too many of these Master PC stories are lame because it's all so easy and nothing ever goes wrong. It was really nice to see someone write a story where the problems crop up quick while also keeping everything very realistic and believable.

I have read and enjoyed everything the author has posted to LIiterotica but everything feels unfinished,