by AutumnWriter
Well AutumnWriter, this was a really well written introduction to, what looks to be, a lengthy series. I have always enjoyed reading your stories although I haven't always liked your characters. However, so far, nothing but good feelings for these two couples! I suggest you stick to the two chapter format for each submission. Pete.
Well-written. Good start. Needs more explicit sex in the story, but I assume that is coming later.
Very good start ...I like your writing style and is well written..Looking foward to the next chapters..
As always well written. I was a bit surprised by the
classification. It sort of dances on the line between different categories. I do believe that you would have a lot more readers if it was listed as Loving Wives, and who says that the category has to involve cheating?