All Comments on 'Matched Pairs Ch. 01-02'

by AutumnWriter

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great

Can't wait to see what happens!

Boyd

PEATBOGPEATBOGalmost 17 years ago
Really well written!!!

Well AutumnWriter, this was a really well written introduction to, what looks to be, a lengthy series. I have always enjoyed reading your stories although I haven't always liked your characters. However, so far, nothing but good feelings for these two couples! I suggest you stick to the two chapter format for each submission. Pete.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good start - needs more sex!

Well-written. Good start. Needs more explicit sex in the story, but I assume that is coming later.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
greattttt story

Very good start ...I like your writing style and is well written..Looking foward to the next chapters..

bruce22bruce22over 16 years ago
Off to a nice start!

As always well written. I was a bit surprised by the

classification. It sort of dances on the line between different categories. I do believe that you would have a lot more readers if it was listed as Loving Wives, and who says that the category has to involve cheating?

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