by AutumnWriter
As always well written. I was a bit surprised by the
classification. It sort of dances on the line between different categories. I do believe that you would have a lot more readers if it was listed as Loving Wives, and who says that the category has to involve cheating?
Very good start ...I like your writing style and is well written..Looking foward to the next chapters..
Well-written. Good start. Needs more explicit sex in the story, but I assume that is coming later.
Well AutumnWriter, this was a really well written introduction to, what looks to be, a lengthy series. I have always enjoyed reading your stories although I haven't always liked your characters. However, so far, nothing but good feelings for these two couples! I suggest you stick to the two chapter format for each submission. Pete.