All Comments on 'Maternity Hall Pass'

If her husband is that big of an asshole, let Liam knock her up so they can continue.

So sweet!

And the pacing is excellent.

Beautiful!! My wife had a fling with a young lad 35 years ago when she was pregnant! It excited me immensley!!!! This was evocative and extremely well written by a great storyteller!!!!

Anon, your hinting towards thoughts I’ve had on a sequel :3

Elaine, awww thanks, glad you enjoyed!

Sweet tale

All the way around. Tender, funny, enchanting.

Great storyline! Keep going.

Terrific! Good pacing and well thought out. Seductive and sexy. Reminds me of when my wife was pregnant. She was insatiable and I loved the way she looked and felt. Great stuff.

Loved it. Well written, and believable setup. Great stuff!

Thanks all for the kind words and Rob for taking a look and providing feedback :)

That was a remarkable story that felt true. Excellent writing! Thank you.

A really well written story and I loved the characters. I hope that you continue the story.

Wonderful story, it's sexy believable and sweet. I usually don't like cheating, but here I was rooting for these two and hoping to read more about them. Would love to see them get together. Well done, thanks for sharing.

One of the best I've read on this website. Would love to see a sequel where Tessa and Liam officially become a couple. Maybe he even attends the birth, in place of her neglectful husband.

Brilliant story....totally engrossed.....we need a sequel!!

A sexy and moving story. Please....give us a sequel!

I would really like to learn a little more about Liam. What he does outside of lusting after his beautiful neighbor, that sort of thing. BTW, for a minute I was hoping Liam's father would get involved, too, but I really think that's a different story altogether.

What a very erotic, sexy, feminine way of telling how a pregnant woman had to lead a very shy boy to having sex with her. Very brilliant and had me totally engrossed in it from the start. If the husband is such a rude SOB, let Liam continue knocking her up..

Yes, it does need a sequel to this lovely story.

Absolutely the best I have read here... GREAT. A man would have to be cut from stone in order to be critical in any way, shape, or form ! P-J, be rightfully proud of this one !

I was in a similar situation as a 17 y/o boy, I mention that because the author has nailed the inexperienced boy’s take of the situation so well.

On top that the author’s prose is artfully polised. All around top shelf writing, wonderfully done.

A story this well-written—and this hot—shows the rest of us mortals how good erotic fiction can be.