All Comments on 'Matt and Brad: Gay Lovers Ch. 05'

It's a good story. Sometimes the I have to reread words because they aren't spelled correctly. You might want to have someone or something proofread your stories before they're submitted. Thank you.

Consider getting someone that posts often to review. I suspect English may not be your first langage. None-the-less, nice story so far! I understand what you mean to say.