All Comments on 'Mattie Lake Pt. 01'

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Anonymousover 7 years ago

Liar

"Jason was naked and laying on his back"

No, He was lying on his back.

Laying and lying are two different words.

monkeywrench158 over 7 years ago

What the f... is wrong with anonymous--lying or laying... g

Get your head out of your ass and use your imagination that's what sex is all about..

lays_69 over 7 years ago

ANNON..

I agree with monkewrench. What is wrong wit all these AAON. assholes. If you are so worried by having the right word in place, get off Lit. and go find a job teaching English somewhere else. To chicken to sign in with your real name. Get a life. Great story by the way.

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Lieing

In fact he was "lieing" :)

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