All Comments on 'Matty's Menace'

You should have written it from Matty's perspective. Bob may be a POS, but MC doesn't look good either

Good story. I gave it a five. I can't wait to see the comments from all the wife-beater commenters saying how she deserved to be beaten and murdered. Come on, boys, don't let me down.

I hare authors who go oit of their way to portray the husband as some schleppy, washed-up has been and their rival as this Adonis.

It’s pure bullshit and it ruins the fucking story.

she and he end up in jail she will do the same again futher down the road once a cheat always a cheat

All characters in this story are shitty... Cheating slut, Man who fuck other person wife and wife beater...

This needs a follow on where her crazy plotting side comes out.

wife stealer.

Nate should have had his as kicked along with the cheating slut. Rather than talk to her husband and work though things, this slut chose to take the tramp route. This story disgusted me due to the attempt to make the cheating assholes the good guys.

Ignore the critics. This is a fine story and their behavior is justified.

Finally, a nice readable story. It almost could be in the romance category.

Hate to see it this way but looks like the crazy hubby was right to try and keep her frumpy, the moment she was around another swinging dick she immediately tried to seduce him. Also before any of this crazy behavior came to light the MC admitted to himself that he was gonna fuck her regardless of the situation. Really horrible people throughout. She definitely got pregnant while cheating btw great start to their happy life 😒

Completely disagree with his ethics, despite the spousal abuse. Still, we’ll told story and believable. 4*

She was scared to leave her crazy husband, but also would not call the police. She cheated with his friend who she considered a safe haven. While elements are disturbing, I have to give you props for taking a disturbing scenario and making it readable. 4 stars.

Question is..why did Batshit Bob go nuts? Was it him or really his wife? hopefully it was him and you can let the story rest.

You should realize trying to write immediately after suffering a massive head injury probably isnt a good thing.

Violence solves yet another problem.

Basically he screws his friend over and takes his wife. Not nice story about not nice people

Good story!

5

she is a whore and he ends up dead what a load of shit

Not bad; not typical BTB LW piece. Some effort at originality. Keep writing.

He didn’t hit her hard enough

It’s A STORY FOR CRYIN OUT LOUD!

Well done! Well l written! Good concept! Way different than normal.

TK

friend to slut wife thief. whose worse him or beat her ass Bob? either way all of them suck, its a new movie title: the slut, the abuser and the backstaber. its a spinoff from debbie did the mailman, story of bored ex-porn star whose married to tito ortz.

0 star - bad idea and any violence always gets a ZERO.

"Any violence always gets a zero" wtf I think nixrox might be Bob in disguise. 5 stars great story

Two cheaters live happily ever after? This is obviously fiction. Badly written, but fiction nonetheless.

Bob was wrong to hit her, but he was absolutely right about his wife's character and faithfulness. She and the MC are quite well suited to each other. Hopefully, someone with a fully developed moral compass will play an important role in the child's life since both parents are liars and cheaters.