All Comments on 'Mature Women Love My Big Cock Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great follow up the story flows and the grammar is good 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Exciting read keep this going an easy 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I love reading your stories I gave you 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

(5) rating. I am not really a fan of shaved pussy and I do like to see glistening cunt lips protruding from thick dark hairy mounds. However, when cunt lips are as thick as you described, they probably need to be openly displayed. I found myself wanting to hear more about her clit. Was it huge, erect, and a suck-able girl cock, that was completely out from under its hood begging to be sucked?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Fantastic story, please don't make us wait long for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

very good

laughdruidlaughdruid5 months ago

Disappointed, I was looking forward to moms reaction to his big dick also to a 3some with mom and Aunt Jo. I enjoyed your story but do not enjoy being left hanging,

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGale5 months ago

Outstanding story, please don't make us wait to long for the next stories in this series..........():\

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594195 months ago

Can't wait until the next chapter 🙉🙊🙈💨🤮

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

your story had my cock as hard as iron.just had to wank myself till i came,thank you.

waypastmyprimewaypastmyprime5 months ago

I enjoy your stories very much. You are correct in trying to find an editor so your sentences don't drag on for a full paragraph. Sometimes dividing the words properly is difficult. Please soldier on. Proofreading, I would enjoy but I don't believe I am qualified to edit

MardracMardracabout 7 hours ago

Your story thoughts are good but in all your stories, tour writing is very mechanical, bad flow. You dont need to sound like you ask the or Barry everytime if theyblike something. Let them person express it without being asked

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