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donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
you and your cliff hangers

I have a feeling that Maurice is going to get an ear full what a place to stop. Spectacular chapter very much enjoyed it you are a very gifted and talented writer thank you for posting

PS. Please post the next chapter as soon as you can

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Urgg

I really want to b**ch slap Regina. I understand all she went through is a bit much, but at least she can be more appreciative. Maurice deserves someone who loves him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Regine is a royal B***h with a capital B

While I understand what she went through, she being unfair to everyone concerned. She really needs to forgive and get over it already and be more open-minded. her family needs and misses her and she has totally shut them out of her life. Its not like they did something to her on purpose. I really don't understand her frame of mind right now. She has a man who obviously wants her and she is shutting him out over this. Poor Maurice--I feel for him but I don't even want him with her right now. She needs a total personality change

Other than that, it was an awesome update

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not again...

I understand all the screaming, yelling and the resistance Regina has shown us so far but maybe this time she should have an internal struggle instead of taking it out on the people, like Mourice, that have helped her stay alive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Regina

maybe it's just me but it seems like Regina is starting to feel something for Maurice even if she hasn't admitted it. in the restaurant when he tells her that he's found his mate her reaction was one of jealousy, her response was something like he's supposed to love me. It doesn't seem like she's shutting her family out she talks to her brothers weekly and she is going back to New Orleans even though she doesn't want to

jazz1190jazz1190over 12 years ago

come on please let her heart change(Regina) he is in love with her and she is in love with him.. so make her see that .. cant want to read the next chapter..

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

she is going to flip

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

lolz She is a dumb,fat, ugly gold digging bitch ..he has found a mate in his ex lover sexy, rich, smart, beautiful.Thats called a ROYAL DUMP LOLZ.Hope he did write that on his wedding cake .LOLZ

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I died laughing. Maurice and that whore??

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Five stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Kalamazoo you are the best

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Omeeegooooooddd.R**** aint got money, sex,beauty,brains nothing.Maurice got that in his mate.Way to go maurice.Another bitch goes down the drain.Yipeeeee

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueover 12 years ago

Regina ain't too bright, is she? Or just in denial?? Maurice is good for her and she doesn't realize it yet. I hope she comes to her senses. Great update!!!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
OOOOh my god!

Delgado is such a pimp that I want to be his baby powder handler to dust his hand before he pimpsmacks someone!

Dear, girl you are an artist to the tee!

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Ragina

the ball now sits in your court. Will she freak out or sit and listen to Maurice? I love the whole scene in the jewelry store, that was classic Maurice. I look forward to finding out what happens next.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
she's a pistol!!!!

This chick is stubborn as a Georgia mule!!!! She never lets up!!!

I want to say I have never encountered such stubbornnnes; but then I remembered

you consistently incorporate this element into your female characters.

It can be most exasperating, but I do love it.

polgaranightpolgaranightover 12 years ago
So Cool

Well this girl is stuburn but you gotta love her. When she faces facts she just pulls up her socks and carries on. Love the ending of this chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Maurice came clean, especially after telling that he had found his mate. Regina is going to hightail it out of that restaurant like her panties are on fires!!!

canndcanndover 12 years ago

this is the first chapter i read, but I'm intrigued and want to go to the beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
She'll Come Around!!

So Regina is stubborn and very reluctant. She's actually more realistic.

You can't expect everyone to be thrilled and openly accepting of vampires and Gremlins being "real." And she didn't just casually meet one. Her two brothers are vampires, her best friend and cousin is married to one, they are responsible for killing her parents, meddling in her life... on and on... and now one is in love with her and wants to marry her. She's conflicted.

Delgado needs to court her, let her get to know him outside of the drama that occurried in New Orleans, and win her over.

Thanks, Kal, for another wonderful update!!

~Bluegardenia

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