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Click hereIt sank gently but all at once. The feeling of being so full is indefinable. He withdrew to sink again, snatching a groan. It was too good. He penetrated me for a long time, making me savor the full size of his beautiful cock.
I felt the pleasure grow again and again. Each movement was a torture of pleasure. This man was a god. For the first time in my life, I really screamed during love. Marc has planted himself deep inside me, seeming to want to push the walls of my little pussy even further. The orgasm left me devastated, dazed with pleasure.
- Luc: Well sweetie! It was strong!
- Me: Oh my god Yes!
Luke hold me and kissed me. I was still kissing Luc when Marc resumed his movements. He pressed on my neck and I found myself breasts on the bed. Marc tightened his grip and he started to really fuck me. I was no more than a female body satisfied by a male. I screamed, I drank, I squeaked and it continued all the more. The orgasms were linked together for a long time as he alternated the rhythm of his penetrations and I still felt his pole as much slide in my tight pussy.
I felt his cock harden again, his thrusts became more jerky and he cum deep inside my cunt. I almost passed out from the violence of my orgasm.
I felt the men washing me but I was a zombie? I think I didn't want to face what we had just experienced so I fell asleep without even worrying about Luc. I didn't even know if he had enjoyed it.
- COMMENTS
IFAFILHGalmost 4 years agoIt is obvious the writer is not proficient in English..but that's ok. It would have been nice if the writer would have converted the cm and kg into English for us..but again..its ok. The main point in this kind of wife sharing is that the hubby was involved in the discussion..in the planning.. and most importantly was present and involved in the excitement. So many times the wife runs off behind the husbands back and I was so glad that was not the case in this story.. nice story !
Anonymousover 4 years ago:-)
Anonymousover 4 years agoCanadian or french cucks, all the same closet gays.
thecarolinadreamerover 4 years agoGood story, but you really should have given us info about where you’re from. It will make a great difference on what we think about your writing. Don’t get me wrong; you tell a beautiful story, but your writing leaves much to be desired—unless this is the accepted style in your country.
I really doubt anyplace accepts this punctuation of dialogue for stories; scripts, yes but stories—I don’t think so but would really like to be corrected if I’m wrong. A study of Lit. stories should help you improve your phraseology.
All in all I found this a pleasant read and gave you a 4. cd
Kalimaxosover 4 years agoSomething about the language difference made the whole thing more...erotic. Go figure eh?
Anonymousover 4 years agoI'm guessing that English isn't your first language. Maybe an editor could have helped you. The telling was both mechanical and wooden. Thoroughly unlikable characters. Laughably bad dialogue. Nothing clever or entertaining about the story. Badly done.
1 star
LenardSpencerover 4 years agoWriting in a different language is always difficult. A great storyline. The actual English was excellent but the "flow" was affected. This is the first chapter. Keep writing. I'm glad it was a "sharing experience" rather than cheating or cuckhold story. Cheers.
sanjeev98over 4 years agoThe title caught my attention because I am from the country.
Then the story caught me. I was hard most of the time while reading the way Marc and Julie got drawn to each other. Holidays do have the effect on us: increasing our libido.
The threesome is the cherry on top.
Looking forward to reading further into the story knowing that this is chapter 1.
Continue exciting us.
Anonymousover 4 years agoYou need an editor's help. But only if you write again, and if you do , do not post it here please.
